Ross Tarran has posted 100 comments
Interesting, although it sounds like a world which is quite difficult to imagine due to its emptiness - a very lonely place. I like the poetic writing.
Reminded me a little of Westeros from Games of Thrones too, with the seasons sometimes lasting for an age and threatening all life until a moment of renewal.
Posted 3 years ago on Sometimes when the sun is high and the leaves are...
Agree with Jonathan, this is very atmospheric and intriguing - if there was another part I'd read on!
Posted 6 years ago on “Is this whole planet dead?” Daniel asked as they...
I love 'Kent ducked behind the Doritos.' and 'the multicolored sugar aisle'. The gentle humour helps lighten the otherwise very real and frightening situation, making it feel a little more like watching a scene from a film.
Posted 6 years ago on After two Big Gulps, one Dew (for the caffeine...
Can tell it was written quickly (dense paragraphs and a rare typo) but that almost certainly helped to give it the strength of feeling very honest and real.
Posted 6 years ago on I lay awake for a long time at night; sometimes...
Excellent - the last line is perfectly jarring and abrupt after the sensuous, evocative lines that come before. You write this sort of thing so well, with great metaphors for love and desire.
Posted 6 years ago on I want to be the sweet aftertaste that lingers...
It's been quite some time so I thought I'd put something new together for Burrst. Not exactly helping to lighten the tone on here I know; maybe the next one will be about joyful things! Any thoughts welcome...
Posted 6 years ago on James looks down. His clothes are quickly...
Mysterious but satisfying!
Posted 6 years ago on A BETTER PLACE The young boy...
Thanks Chris, really glad you enjoyed it, and you picked up on what Red might be (who knows)!
Posted 6 years ago on Red had to stop. There was no way she could go on...
Can't believe I've only just noticed this - I need to visit Burrst more regularly! ;) Good job - it seems to be almost exactly half-way between prose and poetry - there are definately a few places where lines end up rhyming, not sure how intentional that was. Reminds me of the Dr. Seuss stories!
Posted 6 years ago on “For Christmas Dad I want a dragon.” said Suzie...
Nicely written. Some deserve their misfortune more than others!
Posted 1 year ago on Courage in the New Year Two days before New...