Angela Watt has posted 44 comments
This is a wonderful piece particularly the paragraph that starts "Sometimes you're shy". I absolutely loved it and the ending is so bittersweet.
Posted 6 years ago on How beautiful you are, how real, how...
I wrote this after being given an exercise to do by my local writing group. The exercise was about things that had been handed in at the London Transport Lost Property office, one of which was a bag of human skulls. I really enjoyed writing it and had a lot of fun. I hope that you enjoy it too and welcome any feedback you might have.
Posted 6 years ago on Oh boy am I in trouble now. He told me to be so...
I desperately want to know what's written on the paper Jean :-) You did build up the tension and suspense well and then left us hanging at the end, which I like as an ending although I'd still like to know what made his eyes widen.
Posted 6 years ago on The singed page fluttered down on the evening...
Hi Audrey - I really enjoyed this and in particular liked the opening few lines. I also liked the inclusion of the seasons - Rufus not yet seeing his first summer, Barney having a lot of winter in his life. I thought that was well done.
Posted 6 years ago on Seasons We’re not pups anymore – Rufus and I...
Congratulations Nick. Look forward to listening to this soon. Well done.
Posted 6 years ago on Ode to Billie Joe I keep telling myself I...
Thanks so much @Jessica Cambrook, especially your comment about capturing the everyman. That gave me a real boost. I shall be away now for a while, so see you again when I get back.
Posted 6 years ago on So what would you do in my shoes? The ticket had...
This is something a little different from the usual dark stuff that I normally end up writing for Burrst. I hope you like it and as always I'm grateful for any comments you might have.
Posted 6 years ago on So what would you do in my shoes? The ticket had...
Come on Barb - you can fight back. Thanks for posting the latest update on this story @Jamie Thomas as we want to know what happens to Barb. Loved the last line of this.
Posted 6 years ago on As Barb drifted slowly and groggily out of...
I'm reading this in bed and not sure I want to turn the lights off. That last line sent a very definite shudder through my body. Really enjoyed it @Jessica Cambrook
Posted 6 years ago on His eyes don’t blink. From eleven to midnight...
Really enjoyed this @Anthony Blackshaw and particularly liked the ending. Kind of one of those be careful what you wish for moments. Liked where your niece took it to too.
Posted 6 years ago on “For Christmas Dad I want a dragon.” said Suzie...