Robert Sweeney has posted 5 comments
@Rosalind Smith-Nazilli Thanks so much for your kind words.
Posted 6 years ago on "I always though I'd die an old man and yet I'm...
The sheer brilliance in this Burrst is your attention to detail when describing the statue, you made me Google Malachite just so that I could see this stagerringly collosal piece as how I believe you imagined it. I'll definetly be following you and await your next Burrst with a childish glee.
Posted 6 years ago on In an instant my life changed forever. Had I...
A masterful story, I was gripped from the first line. I love the way you give only small details of background leaving the reader to imagine the rest in their own heads. I also look forward to reading more.
Posted 6 years ago on Darren Cunningham watched the water burst into...
A really awesome piece, You build up an atmosphere that immerses the reader in the story fantastically. I'll certainly be following you and awaiting your next piece eagerly.
Posted 6 years ago on He drifted off to sleep. The lullaby did not seem...
@Metta H I intended to leave this open to the readers imagination but in my mind he causes her death through drunk driving and never forgives himself, he just plunges deeper and deeper into depravity until he reaches this, his final breaking point.
Posted 5 years ago on "I always though I'd die an old man and yet I'm...